Saturday - JCs story structure - change to film script

I completed the story structure for the ninth hour. I managed to identify the main story beats and the inciting incident etc. 

JC also got back to me about my last research task and awarded me a high 70/80 mark! He did give me one note to think about in terms of identifying the crisis and choice moment. 

Doing the structure for my script has allowed me to make changes to the initial idea. The gun is now much more central the story. Eireann takes it and it is relevant to the climax and choice of the film. Also, the film has a more hopeful ending now.